Pitch Presentation No.2

Summary

Recently, I had my second presentation, this presentation was far more defined than my previous presentation in terms or direction and purpose.

My general direction changed from displaying video games as art, to defining the good aspects of video games and how games can create a significant experience for the user as they play the game.

Again, the feedback was very useful and directed to doing more practical work and refining how the final project would unfold.

Feedback

General feedback was that I had a advanced research at this early stage and that the project was coming along very well. Lynn commented that she felt like she was sitting in a lecture due to the nature of the presentation which is always encouraging to hear. Generally the feedback was very positive. 

Appraisal:

• Great presentation, almost like a lecture.
• Research is very interesting and rarely studied.
• Good to see some more art work this time.

Constructive Criticism:

• Would be nice to see more of your art work yet again.
• Don't get too focused on the coding, it can take up all your time, it would be good to have more balance.